i love you love poemHow do you find this cute little love poem?

What about you,
Makes my jaw jitter,
Knees buckle,
And my palms ice-cold?

Is it your blue eyes,
As deep as the night sky,
Piercing through each soul it stares?

Or maybe it’s your lips,
So soft and smooth,
As though it’s never kissed a pair?

Could it be your hair,
That neat mess of hazelnut,
Uncombed yet perfectly placed?

Possibly your physique,
Gracefully sculpted by angels,
Like a tease to the heart of the single?

Beauty, what a shallow reason to love.

I love you for none of the above.

Not for your muscles that carry me away,
Neither for your hair that mimics your sway,
Nor for your lips that smile at me every day,
Or for your eyes that look at me so patiently---


But,

For carrying me off the 沙收 on Thursday nights,
For ruffling your hair to make me laugh,
For smiling at me every single day,
For lending me all the patience in the world.
And for giving me your undying love...
I love you.
Hi Valeria,

Okay, okay, you've worn me down I'll critique your poem lol.

Seriously the only reason I haven't commented yet. Is I generally don't critique I'm really into this person poems. Though, I know you're serious about your writing, so if these comments help in any way, here you go. Nothing is meant to be harsh here in any way just quick specific comments that i love you love poemyou can use or ignore, agree with or disagree with:

What about you,
Makes my jaw jitter,
Knees buckle,
And my palms ice-cold?

Good opening. I like jaw jitter for it’s alliteration and the image. I like palms ice-cold. You are appealing to the senses there. Knees buckle strikes me as a bit cliché. You can do better than that.

Is it your blue eyes,
As deep as the night sky,
Piercing through each soul it stares?

I think you can find something better for piercing through each soul. First off, try never to use the word “soul” in a love poem (very cliché) also who cares about what he does to each soul. Keep the focus on what he does to you.

Or maybe it’s your lips,
So soft and smooth,
As though it’s never kissed a pair?

Last line again reads a bit awkward to me. Work on phrasing this better, which you can certainly do.

Could it be your hair,
That neat mess of hazelnut,
Uncombed yet perfectly placed?

This strophe is excellent. Unlike the others so far, notice how it seems to capture the sense of the person. It is specific. Mess of hazelnut is nice phrasing. I’ve read tons of other poems with blue eyes and soft lips, this sounds very original.

Possibly your physique,
Gracefully sculpted by angels,
Like a tease to the heart of the single?

Again, you can write the third lii love you love poemne better. Keep the focus on you.

Beauty, what a shallow reason to love.

You could leave this out or combine it with the idea below. Your poem shows this. It doesn’t need to tell us this.

I love you for none of the above.

Not for your muscles that carry me away,
Neither for your hair that mimics your sway,
Nor for your lips that smile at me every day,
Or for your eyes that look at me so patiently---

Fix the punctuation after patiently, I don’t really mind the rhyme here, but I would say hair that mimics your sway seems a little forced.


But,

For carrying me off the 沙收 on Thursday nights,
For ruffling your hair to make me laugh,
For smiling at me every single day,
For lending me all the patience in the world.
And for giving me your undying love...
I love you.

This has some good specific detail. I like this section a lot. One line to consider changing though “And for giving me your undying love" (a little vague and cliché again you can do better).
I really like this poem, that kick you gave it took it away from an ordinary love poem.
Thanks for sharing!
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unsolved questions in physicsWhat, in your opinion, is the greatest unsolved question in physics?

Physics is about figuring out the basic framework of the universe, and there's no way around the fact that a lot of the universe is still a great mystery. So which one of these mysteries would you like solved the most? And, arguably more important, do you think there is any way to solve them?
oh god..there are about a million of those 90% of which i'm quite sure science will never be able to provide explanation to.
lets see..
1-the big bang..the moment when it all started.
2-What was there before that?
3-Where did the singularity come from?
4-Where did human life come from?Are we just
another form of artificial intelligence?
5-Who controls us and what is the purpose of
this messed up thing called life.
light is number one.Magnetism is number two in that order......etc...

unsolved questions in physics
The nature of gravity is a biggie.
Well, the greatest unsolved (and arguably unsolvable) problem
in physics and any other scientific discipline would be "Is there
are God and if so why won't he use easier formulas..."

Beyond that, in physics, I would guess it would be trying to
understand how the 4 different fundamental forces work
with each other - in particular, how gravity fits in.

There's a lot of work going on in string physics which produced
some really cool models but seems, as of now, to be
unprovable. Maybe "Do superstrings exist" would be the
name of that problem.

And of course, physicists and astronomers agree: How did
it all begin? What came before the big bang?
What is reality? If the human race survives long enough I think it will be possible to learnunsolved questions in physics.
Time travel is probably the greatest riddle. The whole Grandmother paradox opens up the possiblity of parallel universes. I would like to believe I am where I am meant to be, but parallel universes would mean my life is just based on a variants and that there is no "correct path" and that I may not be living the best life possible. And if time travel exists, then can we go back and undo past mistakes? The mind boggles.
How the World Trade Centers fell at free fall speed if they wern't helped out by explosives.
the true pi
Finding a unified field theory. It's the Holy Grail of physics.

And of course we can solve the problem. There is a solution, and though it may take us centuries to do so, we will find it.
Why did the chicken cross the road? I'm stumped.

funny questions to ask studentsWhat are funny questions to ask high school sophomore students?

just ask them what do you think is funnyfunny questions to ask students?
then say something u like like familyfunny questions to ask students guy or ~South Park~ which is way betterfunny questions to ask students

wait and bleed slipknot lyricsWait and Bleed by Slipknot

Whenever I search up lyrics for Wait and Bleed, it says that the leader singer says "I felt the HATE rise up in me".

I swear on my life, every time I listen to that song, I CLEARLY hear him say "I felt the AIR rise up in me". No matter how many times I replay the song, I always hear the word "air" instead of "hate" yet every time I search the lyrics, it says "hate". I could swear I hear "air". Does anyone else hear "air" inswait and bleed slipknot lyricstead of "hate"?

It doesn't make sense...
Yeah, that's my phone's ringtone. I totally hear "air"...
But in the beginning of the song you can tell pretty clearly he says "hate." It kinda sounds like he says it with no h though. But the rest of the sound it definitely sounds like "air." The word hate makes more sense for a slipknot song, but Corey Taylor isn't really pronouncing the h or the t in the word hate, if that is what he's saying. Haha. I thiwait and bleed slipknot lyricsnk the lyrics from the album say hate, though.
listen to a live version you can hear it better.

i know what you mean
i hear air too but every lyrics site i have looked at says its hate
hate makes more sense than air cuz it is slipknot we are talking about here :-)

---CHC75---
yeah...it does kinda sound like "i felt the ayy rise up in me" lol

it sounds more like air than hate

marching bandMarching band?

I remember seeing in tv one time professional marching bands competing against each other. When will they show marching band contests on tv and what was this called?
look at your local cable channel..like your city govt channel.. u can do a lil research and go see em in person...more than likely it was called battle of the bands..or an invitational..or it was a competion..there is this top band i cant remember what its called. dc something
DCI (Drum Corps International) was on ESPN2 about 2 months ago and that was amazing! But yeah I am helping at the Cavaliers drum corp auditions for next year tomorrow, it will be amazingly fun.

Ok, you picked the worst best answer ever.
It's DCI.

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Drum Corps International is the main marching band competition that is broadcasted on TV. They aren't professional though, HS - college age kids. Check out the website.
As far as I know, the only professional marching band is the part of the drum corps called Star of Indiana that makes up the casts of the show "Blast!". ESPN2 shows Drum Corps International championships which is for top American drum corps that people about 18 to 22 years old join and usually pay part of the costs to be in. You Tube has a lot of clips of the broadcasts from fans of certain drum corps. You'll probably recognize some of the shows if you search for "DCI" and the year you watched.
you should check with your cable company.

*and for christnomarching bandgol dilynwr- OMG! i was at the PIMBA champs last night. i am from mcguffey. sweet....we got totally ripped off though with scores...but whatever....
DCI usuallyu its at the end of july beginning of august the have the dci championships
A big one for high school was last night. PIMBA champs. Kiski got first for national, Trinity for AAAA and gateway for AAA. Moon got second in AAAA first time competing. GO MOON!!
I love marching band-- played in it for years.

What you saw on television is the Drum Corps International (DCI for short). Typically they'll show finals at the beginning of the school year (high schoolers and college students audition and march in these bands and have to be back in time for school), sometimes on ESPN. Check www.dci.org for more information.

Hope this helps!

greenberg soundtrackWhat is the song in the movie Greenberg that is played while Florence is talking on the phone?

What is the song that is playing in the movie Greenberg while Florence (played by Greta Gerwig) is drinking and telling Greenberg (playegreenberg soundtrackd by Ben Stiller) over the phone that she is pregnant and going to get an abortion? This song in not released as one of the songs in tgreenberg soundtrackhe CD soundtrack.
Paul McCartney Wings-Uncle Albert/Admiral Halsey You have to get to 2:19 into the song before you hear that part